the guy with the tape measure [and how as usual i look at people and think certain things and there´s always some other story]

The car is a mid 90s Jeep Cherokee with the sidewalls of the tires all worn away and patches of white showing through. They drive over the curb then drop down into a space you’d normally back into. The driver jumps out. He’s in his mid 30′s maybe. His hair is cut short and is starting to thin. Clipped to his right front pocket is a small tape measure. I look at the guy and wonder what he does. Is he a designer of some kind, a builder? What kind of builder would only have a little 3 meter tape measure? He´s wearing a t shirt and jeans that could maybe or maybe not be what a ‘designer’ would wear. He walks in toward Jauja, the ice cream shop at the center of town. Other people get out of the car. Two men in their 40′s. They look slightly disheveled as if they were or are middle class but now it’s hard times and they’re just surviving. The men go to the front of the car and open the passenger side door just as the guy with the measuring tape gets back. They all reach in and help a man who looks like their brother get up and out of the car, then sit him in a wheelchair. The guy with the tape had been measuring to see if he could get through.

  • http://joelrunyon.com Joel

    There is ALWAYS some other story

    So true :)

  • http://thepenandpaper.wordpress.com Alyssa

    David- glad to have connected via Matador. I enjoy the stream of consciousness of this. The questions also work really well to illuminate your thought process. Is there such a thing as “flash NON-fiction”–if so, this definitely qualifies and should be submitted somewhere!

  • David Miller

    that being said, how do you write about people ‘honestly’?

  • David Miller

    thanks alyssa.

    was happy to see your reads pick at Matador btw.

    checked out your blog this morning. love how you’re blogging your whole education / path to writing process in what seems like a really transparent way. i’ve written a lot on that here.

    look forward to reading more from you / working with you downstream.

  • http://thepenandpaper.wordpress.com Alyssa

    Thanks, David. On transparency, that’s a big compliment for me because I think my greatest challenge as a writer is overcoming shyness about the process and how it connects with me as a PERSON–and one who is always learning by trial and error at that.

    Guess I’ll keep doing what I’ll doing!

  • David Miller

    no doubt alyssa. keep it flowing.

    once i heard bradford cox of deerhunter say if people would just keep playing music without trying to sound like each other then it all be so much more interesting (or something).

    that’s how i feel about writing too. if everyone just kept blazing away without worrying about anything else than getting the words down how they needed to sound to them (the writers themselves) then… i dunno.

    the point i guess is to just keep charging.

    and oh yeah, i forgot to mention about the ‘microfiction’ point you raised. right now there is less of a ‘market’ or existing audience for hypercondensed nonfiction writing, although we are publishing some on the notebook.

    sometimes i just submit nonfiction work in super condensed form as fiction just to get it out to places.

    one of these was this past spring, a magazine called rumble:http://www.rumble.sy2.com/stories/notes_miller.html

    have you checked out the six sentences writing community?

  • http://thepenandpaper.wordpress.com Alyssa

    The six sentences writing community is VERY cool. My mom actually bought one of the first anthologies way back when– maybe 3 years ago?–when it was first evolving.

    Psyched that that notebook has been publishing some “micronotes.” Very exciting stuff to be getting involved with–and somehow not surprised Matador has taken it on.

    Also back on transparency– I re-read this (http://retwt.me/1GSDf) and thought I’d mention to you that last fall I took a Literary Journalism class for my creative writing minor at Colgate University. One of our most discussed issues for journalists was how much of yourself to put into the writing, how much do you recognize your connection with your subject, how do you provide full disclosure, etc. (We spoke of this–and also read–in terms of Joan Didion, Truman Capote, Hunter S. Thompson). Very interesting and important topic. The class was taught by Jennifer Brice, a wonderful nonfiction writer from Alaska who has written extensively on growing up there. Her most recent book is Learning to Fly and I would definitely recommend checking it out as an example of literary travel/place narrative that’s very honest in a memoir-like way. It seems like something right up the alley of you and the rest of the Matador eds, writers, readers.

  • http://thepenandpaper.wordpress.com Alyssa

    *the name of Brice’s book is actually UNlearning to Fly – oops!

  • http://www.candicedoestheworld.com Candice

    Probably the best example I’ve read about this whole subject yet. Fair initial assessment though, I would have thought the same!

  • http://www.lolaakinmade.com Lola

    Totally on point and so true.

    Really is a metaphor for how we meander through life. Painting complete pictures of others from the very little we’ve glimpsed of their lives.

  • David Miller

    thanks Candice. honestly i had no idea. had i not spent years as a carpenter i probably wouldn’t even have noticed the tape.

  • David Miller

    thanks for the reference / recommendation Alyssa. i’m going to look up Jennifer Brice right now.

  • David Miller

    thanks lola. how to keep progressing in our writing and photography so it always keeps this in mind?

  • Simone Gorrindo

    The question of writing about people honestly is difficult. As writers, we gather insights from details, and writing tends to feel truest when you let these accumulate on the page, creating a shadow of the whole from the parts.

    But it’s difficult to be true to subjects, I think. What we see has as much to do with us, if not more, than it does with the people we’re “studying.”

    Beautiful little portrait. These are just the kind of details that manage to tell a complex story in a matter of sentences.

    On another note, I can’t believe that the above are photos from your backyard. I am indescribably jealous. ;)

  • David Miller

    thanks for the props on the window view. as my friend tim patterson wrote, patagonia will shatter your sense of scale.

    thanks for thoughts re: honesty in writing as well. more soon.